Reko Black

I agree that this poem is cute in a "I'm bored" kind of way. I am only assuming here, but since you have already mentioned the sun as shiny, then ...

I could picture what you have described here, it was rather ultimate. I'm uncertain why certain stanzas here appear in quotation marks. If the reason for this is in relation ...

There is no rule to say there needs to be a general amount of imagery. Imagery is only one particular tool, this isn't a painting - we rely on many ...

I am in half disagreement with the above. I didn't have a problem with the switching of perspective, as it was contextual, infact I can't grasp how anyone found this ...

I think that it flowed alright. Though, I think the wording was a little ambiguous "nightmare in shining armour" if the poem is declaring love for a person, why is ...